All Comments on 'Magic Pills Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
jackie has done it again!

What will she think up next?

Let's have more of this kind of story and less of the wimpy hubby.

sexmatesexmateabout 19 years ago
You have done another fine job!

Story was excellent! Wish I was with them! You have some imagination! Keep up the great work! You definately deserve to be on my favorite authors list!

Thanks again!

Your fan,

Sexmate

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 19 years ago
Fantastic

Great another great story, sexy, erotic with no cheating. great

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
A sexy dream

Nice show. Loved the bare pussy show. Thought the girls would finally break the ice and put on a full show for the guy's. All in all a good show. Keep it going. You never know , the girls might give the guy's a show of a life time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
EXceptional

No need to dirty this up with sharing of either sex - it would be a shame to ruin a great effort - resist resist resist author!!!

Very imaginative, sensual and entertaining. Not often seen here - nice work!!!

Thanks for your time, effort and talent - best Regards

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Glad I found this sfory

For some reason I missed the ealier chapters--- so went back & read them.

Really like a story with a plot ---- well written & thoroughly enjoyable --- please keep going !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Quite a proformance!

Such a light hearted and provocative story deserves the praise and high ratings it's getting! And Jackiegirl199 has a very wicked imagination.

I kind of wish my ex had encountered the "Mad Scientist," we might even still be married or at least be on speaking terms.

Scorpio44Scorpio44about 19 years ago
A score of ten wouldn't be high enough!

These stories are so wonderful I may contact the Mad Scientist tonight! Well done! Loving, exciting, joyful and within their marriages. Great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Great writing

What a great story, sexy wives and husbands really enjoying thier mate with voyerisum for heat. I could not stop reading!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Great story

Romantic, funny, sexy. What more could you ask for? Well for more chapters, that's what!

Great story. Absolutely love it.

fregen

DWornockDWornockalmost 13 years ago
very nice

Nothing crude; just sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
****

Getting a bit warmer now. Good read. I've seen body painted ladies on "You Tube". It sure beats tats which to me are ugly graffiti. Cheers! connoisseur29

Baddogie59Baddogie59almost 5 years ago
Jealous

Jealous as Hell to be frank. I never received my invite for this get a way... LOL

I have to admit Jackie you have made me a bit Smitten with your words and story.

You have the talent to pull a person into the story to the point of making them a part of it in a sense. That is the sign of a very talented writer and Author.

Can't wait to see how you Ladies use your seductive ways to turn Jade"s thinking into being a sex doll for her husband. I mean considering the magic aphrodisiac is a placebo sugar pill. Just goes to show if a Lover showers their significant other with affection and love and makes them number one over all others the effect will be returned in 10 fold.

Winks with a seductive smile... :-)

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Where do you get these pills?

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