All Comments on 'Making A Whore: First Trick'

Being an old man myself, I loved the story. Wish you had given a little background on the woman.....

Great story,,now take it through the rest of the night.

a very well written story by an author whose work is more impressive the more i read.

As if on her first night as a call girl she did everything so well. Nice story, terribly unrealistic.

This story is hot and sexy and incredibly well told! This story is hot hot hot! Excellent work!

She is one hot lil slut I love it and good 4 her although not all men will treat her so well

It's not in the least erotic to call a woman's anus "her shitter". Call it her rosebud, her butt, call it almost anything but not shitter.

And if when aroused the woman is producing creamy white fluids then she needs to see a doctor, urgently.

You write great sex scenes. I must read more of your stories. I stop smoking over 20 years ago, but after reading that I need a smoke!!!!! Thanks for sharing.