by MisterReason
It was a little short,but it was cute. I wish there was a category for "bbw" (family and bbw) makes for a hot story. Thx
Time appears to be a problem, 18 years old and had diapers to change 8 years ago?
I liked the way you developed the intimacy between them. The focus on her armpits was good because that does turn on a good number of both men and women. It would be interesting to hear more about what happened to his mother and how he wound up living with Aunt Meg. The openness she showed was so nice in that it obviously took him by surprise. You also should have spent some time describing what she looked like between her legs--it's as important as describing her pits. You've given me some ideas to stimulate my own writing here.
"Oh yes Jimmy, fuck me, fuck your aunt," aunt Meg shouted! "You'd be even prettier if you shaved your pits, and around your pussy so you can wear a bikini aunt Meg," Jimmy panted. "Don't worry about that now, fuck me," aunt Meg growled! "
I love stories of older women who choose to remain natural, with soft saggy breasts and unshaven armpits. For whatever reason I have always found that look extremely sexy and attractive!
The story was also believable.
I love it but it's to short needs to be longer and have more build up. The sex scene is nice but to short. it would be nice to get to know both characters a bit before the big event and have it last longer. It has promise but needs more passion. You get points for keeping her natural as most older women like to stop maintaining their body hair. Also depending on when this is based she might not be in the shaved pussy era. You get three stars you lost two for not taking your time and ending the story to quickly
To be honest, to me it was to short and a bit boring, usually i like the stories that has a build up with backgrounds, reasons and stuff like that, and what's up with the diper thing?? Normaly the ppl involved are 18+, so he used dipers at least as a 10 year old? so many things is off with this story, sry only 3 stars
Wait aunt changed his diaper 8 years ago? How old is the kid? 11 12 in the story?