All Comments on 'Mandy and Her Father Ch. 01'

This might be a long story but you had me hooked all the way. Good build up of characters and some great Incest action all the way. Can't wait to read the next chapter, hopefully Jenny will be joining Mandy & Helen with a 4 in the bed scenerio.

That's all I need to say..You write awesomely . It's very believable....and erotic...I will never enjoy such a beautiful life..of sex and wonderful relationships ..So I will have to depend on you to capture ..those sentiments...Will you return a note when you have written another episode...Email me ...kizambeezi@yahoo.com...The name is Lloyd...

......like this:

"watched spellbound as she squirted several hard hot jets of cum all over her breasts and belly. The first two or three were so powerful that they hit Jeremy's belly. "

Get real FFS!

Very fun read; could we have a sequel, please?

Also, don't listen to Anon; it's obvious he has never experienced a woman squirting, and will never have a clue on how to make that happen, or an opportunity to do so.