All Comments on 'Mary'

Such a nice change to read something like this...with an actual plot as opposed to just cutting straight to the sex for the sake of it.

More please!

... and refreshing! I enjoyed the storyline and am looking forward to the next installment. Please don't make us wait long! hehe

Great story, great writing! I completely lost track of time reading it.

But, please don't leave us here. There just has to be more!

This story was wonderful!! Please don't leave us hanging!

this was a great story, please tell us you're going to tell us the rest of it. we need to know what happens next

This story deserves a real ending!!!

This is a good story...it deserves an ending.

Total rubbish by a wanker

This isn't a whole story, it's half of one. Write the whole damn thing and we'll see.

Please finish I need more of Mary and William...

But you get 1* just to vote for not finishing the story. SHAME ON YOU!