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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
A little hard to follow with all of the people

With so many people doing so much it makes it a little hard to keep up with the story. It seems to be a bit cold and not any real passion, other than just raw sex. The story needs a little love in it. Thanks for the chapter....Rich

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