All Comments on 'Maybel-line'

Manny that was a nice story that you wrote about Mabel and and Steven. I like how you develop the characters to the story from her losing her husband and Steve losing his parents. I like how they developed a friendship and the fun they had with the date and the sex. You left us hanging with the ending of the story and I hope you write a second chapter to the story describing what happens when Steve watches Mabel with the other men and how he feels about it.

Hell he should just go for it , she will fuck his brains out and not fuck anyone else. Hand jobs don't count as having sex with someone, and she was faithful to Jack, so go for it. Maybe he can talk her into a real love relationship. A really good story, and hope to read more. Thanks.....Rich

What can I say? I really enjoyed this story. If there is more I know I will enjoy that too. And what I enjoy is less the story than the way that you tell it.