All Comments on 'Me and my Sister-In-Law 01.2'

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Anonymousover 3 years ago

More please

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Rushed

It all seems rushed which honestly does this fantasy a disservice. Cramming a bunch of stuff into a painfully short chapter won’t garner the amount of readership you want. Part of the allure of sister-in-law erotica is the tease and the built up tension. If your goal was sex, you’ve accomplished that with nothing more than 2 paragraph-long chapters. For those who want more, it totally missed the mark. Keep trying.

Anonymousover 3 years ago

More!

More please! We are looking forward to the pregnancy!

Rancher46 over 2 years ago

Story was very entertaining and deserves another chapter. It will be interesting to see how Hellen if she gets pregnant by Danny how she will explain it. Well Done, hope you continue this but a year has gone by it is doubtful.

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