All Comments on 'Me And My Sister's First Time'

My brother and and I have been having sex with each other for many years and we still do from time to time.

I know there are rules about a minimum age of 18 for the protagonists of the stories here, but having said they are 18 and 19, you can't then write a story about twelve-year-olds.

This story sound familiar. My sister and I had the same experience many years ago when we were much younger. It was clumsy inexperienced sex but it was fantastic and I still remember my sister whispering in my ear, "I'm cuming" and I said "Me too". It happened several times when we were young and after a while we got pretty good at fucking.

Very nice and arousing / hot story. I had a few buddies who had been screwing their sisters and they stayed close all their lives. That is something special they have told me. Deep love and protective. No one got pregnant and no one got hurt. Very good and I hope the next chapter is in more detail and that they have found inventive ways to get together and do it. More physical details would be appropriate now that they have done it. Thanks.

You said they both shared info about other guys and girls. Was this her first also or how many guys had she been with. She mentioned his cock was the biggest she had seem.

I hope you will add more chapters about their summer of fun and discovery

Why do writers think 38 dd tits and 9 inch dicks make good story’s

Too many errors to make a good read. Grammar and wrong word issues ("toe" for "tow", "waste band" for waistband" twice, "feel" for "feeling" just to name a few). Suggest you get an editor for your next submission.

It all depends on what country the story is set in. In Australia the age of consent is 16.

Hot quick story. I loved it.

Get an editor.

This is a nice tantalisingly short story. But it was spoilt mainly by spelling mistakes e.g. WASTE is what you flush away WAIST is your mid-riff

There are more if you re-read, unfortunately the "Spell Checker" will not find them.

Keep writing.

I believe it's real but I want to know what else happened.

i loved this story was just what i was looking for for the night

Although I wouldn't commit incest with my sister, it was an amazing story. I loved that this is a real story with some tweaks here and there, another thing that caught my interest was the escalation of the conversation from "I found your dildo, haha" to "you can cum inside me". I would like to see more weighting from you, this may have been just a story to tell other people how you and your sister truly love each other. But in my opinion, I do believe that you are an amazing writer and would like to see your name on a book someday.

my dad walked in, my mom in toe = Didn't you mean 'tow'?

waste bad of my Pjs -- Did you mean 'waist band'? (Your story as at least 3 different spelling versions!)

I woke up the next morning feel weird = didn't you mean feeling weird?

Innocence lost, with his sister yet! Don't detract from it with typos, if you don't want to use an editor for some reason then print your story out and use a highlighter on EVERY word you read. Keep going, very good.

I wish I had a brother like this

I truely lover this story. Keep up the good work.

Except for the typos, a riveting story. Keep up the good work.

Anyone capable of writing a story to post here should know the difference between "waste' and "wasteband" that you wrote and "waist" and "waistband" which is what you meant. LEARN THE DIFFERENCE, or don't post.

Great story!

I like the story very much. Could have been drawn out just a little more. I hope you will continue this story line.

Finally a good story on here for this kind of incest now I want to go f me sister XD

This is simply an amazingly captive story.

Good thing she was on the pill. The first time with my sister was very messy as I came all over her naked body.

brings back the time I had sex with my sister we didn't want it to happen but it did I was sixteen she was fourteen going on fifteen we happened to be home alone we were playing around tickling each other an holding on to each other it made me get hard an she wanted to feel it an I could feel her that's when it all happened the next thing we were naked rubbing our bodies tighter my cock got between her legs an we were humping tighter all of a sudden my cock slipped in her about two inches I started to pull out she stopped an said put it all in me I knew it was wrong but I couldn't help myself I wanted it as bad so I went all the way in all six inches now she wasn't a virgin any more she asked if I was about to cum she said lets cum tighter an I filled her full of my cum thank god she did get pregnant

I guess she was not a virgin since said it was the biggest she had seen

Good one

I like your story, well written.

Story was OK but all the errors made it a 1 star.

I wish that happened to me💦

Oops. There is no editor (obviously). Get one. Good story. If you find the time, you might consider writing one with Druids on Unicorns. Or not. I don't care. BTW is it waste, waist, wayste, or waest?

I did get a little distracted by the spelling errors but it didnt detract from a well told story. An editor would be icing on the cake but i just kept reading anyway.

Well writen tale, something most brothers would like from their sister/s, i know i have 5 older ones and had many a happy wank over them as I grew up.

5* from me and thanks, brought back some happy fantasies ide noth thought of for a fair few years.

Cheers :)

any chance of a second chapter to let us know how the sibling romance went?

Enjoyed the story greatly and have a suggestion for improvement. Just after they had both reached their orgasm he should have pulled her down closely on top of him so that he could feel her breasts on his and wrapped his arns around her tightly and told her how much he loved her. She deserved that small sign of love and tenderness which most women deserve and crave after the act of making love. Telling her that you love her after givhing her your baby making cream makes your chance of loving her again that much greater.

Very tender and touching. A definite feel good story. Would love to hear more. And btw, just ignore the negatives. 5** plus imo.

-bern1965(pending)

Memories of my first sexual encounter with my sister. We got each other off manually because she was afraid my big thick cock would hurt her pussy, and she didn't want me spunking in her. I blasted my hot spunk all over her smooth creamy thighs and her pussy hair! She thought that was erotic as hell.

My first time with my sister was almost the same, She caught me stroking off when I was 13 and she was 15. She said your not doing it right and took over. WE just had oral sex that first time. But soon after we had full on intercourse and it was fantastic. Sometime over summer breaks we would fuck 3 Times a day, until my dick was almost raw. We continued to fuck a lot until I was 19 and she was 21. I don't regret it at all, as I feel it made me a better sex partner. I get lots of complements on my Oral skills by both women and Men, AS I am Bi. WE both live normal lives and see each other often and have kept it a secret for nearly 40 Years. Great To know others are ou there.

next chapter please. keep them exclusive.

Too bad there aren’t more like this but life is complicated. Incest keeps things regulated in a reasonable way.

Good, soft, sweet story. Nice read. ... I also read a few comments for the usual laughs. Seems a few literary giants come to make their point known... 'get better or don't post', really? Again, nice tender story. I could see it unfolding, and you kept the taboo 'sweet" by going down an unnecessary grimey path.

Short and ok but true...none of these are true.

Fucking loved it. Really erotic and well-done.

the best sex i had was with my sister because u know its wrong in most societies an you dont want to get caught but it feels so right

Fun sister...

I'm envious....

Waste band should definitely change to 'waist' band...

That was distracting

Great story, very arousing like my time with my cousin.

Good story. Just like my sister and me. We were lovers for many years until she got married.