by SnowboardJack
Good but expected more at the end as the beginning set it up as being further down the line than where it actually finished so I hope there is another part to finish of this story as it seems a little incomplete to me but Avery good story as far as it went just needs a better finish I gave it 5 stars but very nearly didn’t I nearly gave it a 4 but in the end though it was a bit too harsh so gave the 5 but it only just scraped in as a 5 star