All Comments on 'Meghan Steps Out'

by thundap

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brian358brian358about 17 years ago
Well Done!

Excellent first story.

Might we get to see more of Meghan's adventures?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Right up my alley

Great character. I've been working on a similar approach to a college girl. You hit the nail on the head and would love to read some more andventers from Meghan.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
A little out of step

Not a bad story but it could have used a little editing. The biggest glaring error was in the name of the sorority. In the first paragraph you said their initials were KOG but the sorority's name was in the same paragraph said to be Kappa Gamma Omega. Were you trying to make some sort of point by calling the girls KOGs -- like perhaps a cog in a machine? If so it was lost on me. One last thing what sort of frat is going to let their pledges get blowjobs from sorority pledges before the brothers ever stepped in and had their fun? Sure pledging can be a ton of fun but it's never more fun than actually being a brother.

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