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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
:)

Cute, exciting and lovely, please keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
OMG !!!

Up a Virgin poop shute.

We must have more.

barepussloverbarepussloverover 17 years ago
Very Nice!!

Very interesting approach to losing one's virginity! Hope this story line has additional chapters to cum!! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
More Please!

You simply must continue this story. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

dude your fucking genius

callmeanytime_666callmeanytime_666over 14 years ago
great

very very enjoyable and with quite a twist on the whole aunty thing, the fact she kept calling her aunty made it seem quite wrong but at the same time it made it more naughty so more right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Illustrated?

This story is listed in the Illustrated series stories, but there are no illustrations.

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Umm, I guess that this update is the same as the last, and the one before that and the one before that and now the one before that!; I'm afraid it's taken far too long to get around to writing another story, having started it earlier this year. Alas, I have a number of pastime...

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