All Comments on 'Melissa's Legacy Ch. 01'

A great story, which I hope will be continued. I can not imagine that the author left it here. There must be more, much more to come ...

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

A very good start although I'm still confused as to why this author stopped the story at that point.

This has potential to go in so many directions. Finish this story it can't end like this.

Thank you for the feedback. I'm working on the next chapter.

Please, please stop asking our pardon for your "poor English as it is not your first language". #1 - I've heard it from you many times before, so it is now redundant. #2 - You're wrong about your English being poor. Having read many comments from you I have yet to read anything close to poor grammar or inappropriate word choice or a too-weak English vocabulary. So, I will contend that your continually requesting pardon like this is inappropriate but moreover, unnecessary. In fact, your usage of English seems generally in the upper 50th percentile of all comments I read here - Including those of us for whom English (of, for those on the eastern edge of "the pond", I may mean "American English") is our native tongue. So, stop worrying about it already! Ok?

Now, as for this story - a very nice start...but we need a lot more than this mere stage setting piece before I can begin to think of this as an actual story. So 4* for the good start so far - with hopes for more.

Yes, the story was brief... But it was to the point. The quick end brought me up short; but when I considered what was happening, I came to realize that there was no way he was going to let Millie Mk 2 out of his sight and therefore there's no need for a continuance of the story!! She would be rescued! 5*

19pvc44

Darn it ... Meant Melissa Mk2

Desculpa

19pvc44

Too soon to end! Please continue! I gave you 5 Stars!

It was also a great way to end it, but dang it would be so nice to read a couple of more chapters.

Definitely needs another chapter

You need to continue this story it has the good start to a great long romantic story. Just needs a few more pages to help flesh out the characters.

5 stars to a great beginning !!

If its chapter 1, say so in the TITLE, I don't waste time on unfinished stories as many, many go unfinished.

This was originally intended to be this one chapter. It was a present for my wife. There is enough reader interest to continue so I will finish it. Should be released next week.

Very interesting!

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