All Comments on 'Memoirs of a Photographer Ch. 01'

But there's a lot of punctuation and grammatical errors in your story. Suggest you use an editor or read it over to yourself out loud. But keep trying.

And I can overlook a few failures of punctuation when a 5 star story is at hand.

"To be continued" was a welcome addition at the end of Ch 01. Let's have Ch 02 ASAP.

As others have indicated an editor is required. In addition use of international dictionary and spelling of words be used as readership is of a worldwide variety. using the spelling like "colour" when internationally its "color" harms and causes many to not read. So forget the local ism's and slang as most wont know what it is and thus confused.

Ignore the idiot who expects American spelling. The civilised world uses The Queen's English.

Good story, by the way, but editing could improve it.

Keep up the good work.

Why do so many americans think that only their way of spelling is the correct way. I'm pretty sure far more people spell the English way than the American way, and we don't complain about them. Odd. Very odd.

good story. sounds like you probably know a bit about photography and models from some of the details provided. adds some realism. very interesting and wasn't boring.

i am also writing a story about a model and would love to hear your feedback if you have time! thanks!

The penile head is "The Glans Penis",not the glands