All Comments on 'Merry Ex-Mas'

Good work-you actually tell a plausible tale and establish the characters enough so that one actually is interested in what happens to them-in rare thing in any form of fiction, let alone in erotica.

You did indeed develop your characters. Very believable. Give yourself an 'A'.

has to be the best of yours ive read,hope we can have more of these 2 just these 2 no need to add anyone else or if not enough scope in that maybe she has a lonely friend he could help,but totally believable so hence my name change comment

I could see and feel everything you wrote. You just gave my vibrator a nice workout.

I trust there will be a round 2 for these two. Very interesting story.

Thanks

Very Good I love stories from women especially as good as this one. I truly hope you write more as I have your name down and will look for more from you son.

Thank you author.

I wish the scoring had a level 10.

Plausible story, entertaining. Only wish there had been some loose-end tie up with the daughter though, an explanation for the breakup, or reason behind her obvious stupidity. Only item that detracted for me from the two of them getting together. Otherwise, very...very enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.

MF

Well written & erotic as hell!!!

A little more detail of why her daughter dumped him, why he happened to be at the party, etc. would have enhanced the story for me. I'm also interested in what's next for them

For some one who professes to write stories which fly in the face of reality, you have produced an excellent and very believable tale. Excellent stuff.

This story had me as hard as a rock. I want to see a sequel. Maybe he can come back with a friend and they do a 3-some

Much as I respect Scorpio44 and Many Feathers' insistence on filling out why the daughter dumped the paragon boyfriend, it's just a suggestion. Personally, I think this story's just fine on its own and eagerly await any more chapters you wish to write.

Very enjoyable and quite realistic. I have to agree that it flies in the face of your name! And I'll also join the chorus and say I'd like to see more of these two: I imagine they'd have some fairly interesting pillow talk: "So... Whatever happened between you and my daughter?"

I, too, will echo previous kudos. I especially liked the correct spelling, word choice, grammar and such things. The sex was pretty good, too, given that he was just a kid. No doubt the fictional character learned a lot from the author! I'll be looking for more chapters, especially when the daughter finds out about it.

Brother, you can write! And imagine! And construct enough reality for the lot of us for some time!

The story was believable and moved well.. Mother / Daughter action! Some new tricks for her - let her learn Anal!

Plausible, with real characters (although young David is too good to be true). Regina is a real person, not the usual cardboard. Also interested to know why daughter dumped the paragon--maybe she wanted heavy-duty BDSM and he couldn't oblige? George M. Cohan got it right, and so did you--always leave them wanting more

Thank you for a great story. Your story was my key to a goodnight sleep, and a satisfied kitty. =)

It was a damn good story m uch like my mother in law last chrirstmas, she is divorced also, wife as shopping, last minute stuff, stopped by mom,s house [her mom], she was just finishing showering and didnt see or hear me enter, , lets just leave it as this; she is one fine ass mother in law. good story , write more, enjoyed.

I think the girlfriend broke up with him because she couldn't handle how big he was. A lot of women can't handle that big of a cock. Just saying...

I really liked how the initial expectations for the story suddenly changed. It flowed well, the dialogue and reactions felt very natural, and the sex was believable and well-described. Stands out above the crowd - a five for sure. I'll have to read your other stories now!

Great story--good plot, well described sex.

however, I think all the others have said it all. I am enjoying your stories and will definitely follow your new ones.

Hot!

Hot Hot!

HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!

Great writing!

In the show Once Upon A Time, the evil queen Regina tries to seduce David, who recently broke up with Mary Margaret (aka Snow White, her daughter). Isn't that weird. Amazing story though.

This one is well-written and very erotic. There are few better.

So well written and hot, I'm so turned on from reading your story. Well done! One of the best.

I was fortunate to be alone with my eldest sister in-law when my cousin was sleeping

Our subject turned to girl friend and both of us aroused. I got up and held her shoulders. She came forward and kissed me. In a minute her tounge entered my mouth and my hands on her hot hips. Within 5 minutes we were on bed in guest room. She devour my cock and me slurped on her bushy juicy cunt.

Later I entered her juicy pussy and perfectly gave her strokes. After her third orgasm she turned on fours and got deepest fucking.

Our Indian Hindu brahmin ladies in late 30's and even in 50's are wanton. I fuckef Meeravahini more than 10 times in next 3 days. On last day meera gave me her anal cherry.

She promised me to visit my place in pune and when she came with her younger sister Manisha both gave me double pleasure with one riding and other sitting on my fa

Work those fantasies... Yeah.

I totally enjoyed reading this story and hope you have more adventures for these two people. Very Hot Erotic story!

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hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

I think you could write a sequel to this. Good writing loved it

The two found great lovers for each. She loved him for his masculinity and he loved her for her femininity.

I love your humor almost as much as your extremely arousing stories, thank you for that!

Loved it, so full of great descriptions, good plot and characters