All Comments on 'Mind Fuck Ch. 04'

Very well done again. I thought you had lost it with the recitation of her history with Guy, but nicely recovered and back to some very erotic activity with Guy guiding their actions. As to method of publication of next four parts, you may have submitted these at one time, but Lit published them over four days. Was nice to find a new installment each day, so I would vote for spacing them apart. Nice slow seduction, just the way I like it.

I so love to think this is really you and the life you enjoy. The things you write about sond like you have experienced them and loved ecvvery second of the pleasure.,

I think this is very cleverly thought out and a great story line that makes me think it is an extract from real life. I would love to find out. One at a time please or will be overwhelmed with reading. Tom x

as always from this wonderful, arousing writer, but I'm a bit confused Mandy. The description for this chapter identifies it as the conclusion yet you say you have an additional four parts written as well. Are they parts of this story or a new one? It does seem that Amanda is due an ass fucking so I hope they are additional chapters of "Mind Fuck."

As for the release schedule, I guess it depends on your goals. Daily releases help frequent readers better cope with the continuity of events. More widely spaced releases would keep the story in the "New" releases longer and probably yield greater views. For myself, I think more widely spaced releases would be better.

Blaine