All Comments on 'Mission Beach Ch. 01'

Very well written. I liked the fun, teasing tone it took - it was a nice change of pace. I'm excited for future chapters.

Good threesome stories are hard to get right. We know, we try very hard with ours! This is delicious...

As a San Diegan, I'm enjoying that your story is set in our fair city. And I have to say, wow, fantastic sex scene. There aren't many women like Laci in the world, but the few that exist are wonderful!

I'm not sure I'm digging the "Heather" storyline though. Her new husband is such a jerk he's almost a cartoon.

Still, this chapter is outstanding for the sex scene!

You have an incredible talent!

Chapter 2 (and any others you happen to come up with).