All Comments on 'Modeling'

Lightening -- is what you do with a load. Lightning is that million-volt electrostatic discharge.

Fishing tackle box -- I always find this amusing. I don' know of any other tackle box. I'll be nice, I COULD be wrong about this.

The story was overall well written, but it’s like Bill was trying to justify being attracted to a thick woman. It’s okay to be attracted to a fat woman. It’s okay to be attracted to someone not your usual type. But constantly justifying about how she was fat, but like, not in a bad way kinda fizzled my flame.

I read this yesterday and read the comments too. I’ve been thinking about it and I concur with the previous commenter about the fat comments. It leaves a sour note to what is a very good story. I have enjoyed many of your stories over the years but this one not so much. I haven’t read the next in the series and don’t think I will. What about a rethink or a rewrite to turn all that apologetic rationalizing self excusing into a lovely story celebrating a beautiful woman with a sense or humor and the ingenuity to get her man into a good cfnm scene. L O R

I'm fine with the comments personally. After all, he didn't know he was attracted to fat women. It was a good character arc imo.