All Comments on 'Molly & Marilyn & Me Ch. 01'

Looking forward to reading more!! Terrific writing and story telling. Please post more soon.

Excellent story, very well written. I was drawn in to the story and was pulling for all the characters. Can't wait for part 2. Really, really good!!!

Excellent flow. Great start.

The ability to evoke emotions shows the quality of the writing. Let's see what is coming down the tubes. He could always be happy about helping two other people if nothing else...

It's hard to believe the number of different subjects this guy covers in different stories -- here it is personal training. How can you be so familiar with so many things?

Also it is not typecast -- just bc you read one story does not give you a line on how the next will go. Impressive.

Paul in Oklahoma

Good writing with a little romantic suspense. Keep it up