All Comments on 'Mommy Vanessa'

Taking care of business!

5

Yay! New JPB story. A fun one. Thanks for posting. Looking forward to your December story. Randi.

Vile

Loved it! Five stars and a favorite point!

Rob IS DISGUSTING.

Man, if he was my son, I would really kick this betraying asshole out of my house, cut him out of my life and will. What a vile son. Instead of protecting his Dad's honor, he instead started stroking his penis. Yes that was the part when I quit reading and...

Yeah this one truly deserves the 1-star I am giving.

Disgusting piece of crock.

Okay... one question, though. What was it, that had your MC so stunned at the beginning of the story? You opened the story with him staring at the magnets on the fridge, but then delved into a flashback and never really told what happened?

I always liked JPB stories and this one maintains the run. I can see how some people would be upset at the concept of son fucking father's wife, but this one works as both believable and not even that immoral. A 5*.

You always find a new twist to keep the stories fresh, and after writing so many. Thanks Bob!

OTT? From JPB? Nah, never happens :D

Thanks for sharing 5* from me.

Decent story, but damn, it’s hard to like stories where there’s not a single admirable character.

Somewhat predictable but always a fun ride from you. 4*

Fantasy we all know would never happen in a million years

Different. Good.

They did a lot of mental gymnastics.

Made me laugh out loud. Thank you for letting us read it

Fairly well written, but not one of JPB’s better offerings.

keep up the good work.

He was having sex with his father's wife and fathered a child with her. The wrong man died.

Well that was original

Ever notice how 'rider' can't stand any of your tales? To prove it she seems to read most of them (do you suppose that she is Harry in drag)? Always look forward new JPB tales, enjoy them all - thanks Bob. 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

The only thing that she MIGHT have been guilty for was if her husband had lived to make it to the hospital, and she wasn't there for his last moments, but that wasn't the case.

Good story. I don't believe 'borderline nympho' is a thing, though. Either yes or no. D

Great story and a fun read.

Yep. Just what I have come to expect from JPB. Top of the mark all the way

Entertainment JBP style.

Wish he had probed the "mommy" thing with her.

Oh joy, a pseudo-incest story.

Another good JPB story.

EXCELLENT !

A jpb story is always a treat, skewed at times, maybe a bit weird, but fun. Only thing wrong is these days q civil engineer would be doing a lot more on a computer than CAD:)

Always room for a classic JPB tale, always a pleasure to read too. Thank you

JPB has a way, a good way. 5*

Good, fun story. 5*, obviously.

Lost interest when it became another JPB cuckfest.

Randi is as big a joke as you are. Pathetic, both of you losers.

Yeah, l liked it. Good story, everyone consented, no one hurt.

Scores 5/5

Oh hell yea !

wow, I hope he has a son and she does it with him also. The son was more of an asshole than slut was.

No. Just no.

Nympo or not, you don't screw your fathers wife --- with or without permission.

Two stars.

That was kinda nasty. I mean he was really doing a horrible thing to his father. What are they going to tell their son when he gets old enough to ask questions? Didn't any of HIS peers question the whole deal? What did they do for money with him just starting a job? Why not move far away where no one knew them?

Didn't like this one, Bob, but you keep writing 'em and we'll keep reading 'em. Thanks for the effort.

this is beyond disgusting

Good one, JPB! Keep em cumming!

I don' think its you, I think its me. I'm just tired of you. Not bad nor badly written, just not very interesting. A ridiculous plot with preposterous characters exhibiting trailer trash behavior and values; about your average. Hope it is still good for you. Thanks for the effort.

The son did right by his father, despite what the naysayers below have commented. He kept Nessa off the streets and at home, and Dad was already comfortable with her getting some strange when he was on the road.

Would like to say that this story belongs on a bathroom wall, but that would be doing a disservice to the anonymous authors who use that venue. Just Plain Crap.

Several quibbles, but first …

Incest, IMHO, is a term that has a fair range of definition. Originally, and most conservatively, it is a degree of shared blood, which in its own right has a range from parent/child to siblings to distant cousins, including ‘removed’ which is akin to uncle/aunt to nephew/niece. More liberally (not politics) societies have introduced ‘degree of influence/power’ with considerable rationale. A step-parent of an infant who will not remember the ‘real’ parent does not have substantially-common blood, but does have powerful impact.

In this tale, MC-Son is nearly full-adult when step-mother arrives. Neither blood, nor much developmental impact.

So, this is not, IMHO, a story in LIT-Incest. But the Father/Son relationship is potentially troublesome! If the missed phone call had been BitCharacter-Dad’s notice that he was two hours away from home, then the water could get very muddy! As it was written, the muddy water comes from Son having to adjust the hell out of his inherited business, since he is unprepared for much of Dad’s clientele. But that point was not addressed JPB in this account. Maybe in a sequel!

Amazing that JPB can adeptly thread his way through such an aspect of the plot fabric and refuses to see errors that a literate 5th-grader would spot!

5* despite not using a free editor (or an inexpensive 5th grader)

BTW, Huedogg2

MC-Son does have a son - named Jimmy, and is not a SHE … yet. perhaps he will get Gender Drift in Kindergarten and a cunt by 4th grade and become an NFL starter!

JPB does one thing as well as anyone, and better'n most: he keeps his stories refreshingly fresh. Yeah, a majority of them are the same plot, and his characters recycle with the frequency as something wrought by the German Green Party, but his stories are always a first-read. His writing voice is excellent, too. 5++/5!

Good story! Thanks for posting.

Sick and surprisingly fun and satisfying.

What a marvelous perverted story! I loved it. One of your best ever...

Fun as always JPB

Who needs enemies when you have a character pig for a son?

Bob being Bob.

How this one could even score over 4 is a mystery for me. The son was a scumbag of the highest order and even Vanessa. He could rationalize his actions all day and it still wouldnt excuse what he did. Cucking his father doesnt show any respect. Also Vanessa broke the rules of their open marriage, there was a reason why she wasnt allowed to fuck the same guy multiple times.

A little different plot with this one Bob, I enjoyed it, it was fun. Thanks. KS

*****This is what you call a JPB Special. Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

@Iamnotananon: Heh, yes, my whole purpose for being on Lit is a joke. I also share jokes with JPB. At least we funny jokes, not sneaking around in the bushes behind an alt sort of jokes. You want a joke? I'll share this one with you. Just for you, Not-Annie.

*****

"Porn gives young people an unreal and unhealthy idea of how quickly a plumber will come to your house." Byee, Randi.

⭐⭐1/2

WTH, horny MILF, now she's a widow, hell yes keep her in there family. Loved it, five stars!

Cute -- and original; I like original. 5*

Great! But would be a good idea to turn on the grammar checker! 😀