All Comments on 'Motherslut Ch. 01'

wow just wow great stuff. I wish i had a motherslut great stuff can't wait to see what's next

A good story. Other than a few word errors, a good story. More please. Thanks for your time and imagination.

More Motherslut stories please!

I didn’t feel this was about control but geared towards humiliation. The “Motherslut was a bit too much and it was abused in the story. I’ve read your other mother-son stories and enjoyed them. Hopefully chapter 2 is better

Amazing, really interested in seeing how the second chapter turns out , can't wait

I really enjoyed the way you got right to it with just enough introduction. Some stories are blah blah blah about background bullshit. Ok I agree that someone needs to proofread the story for grammer and sentence structure before you post. But please please, don't make us wait too long for chapter 2. Good job!

Johnnyballs

Despite what others have commented, this is seriously my new favorite.Please, if only for me, write many more chapters of this!!!

It is a good story and he's a good motherfucker.

It's always amazing, but not unexpected, that almost every negative comment are anonymous.

I love these stories alot and wonder if I ever will as well. Seduction is the key to these stories, mothers (submissive of course) are hot when they are in Lingerie and are caught semi naked by their son ..It would be even hotter if mom and her sister had one moms son wowsa!!!!!!!!!!

I enjoyed the story and look forward to the remaining chapters. Without the background, the son could easily be made out to be nothing more than a prick. However, it is enjoyable that the son loves his mother enough to encourage and satisfy her desires and fantasies.

Pure unadulterated incestuous depravity. How can it be better than that, besides more of it

Early on, why did he think it was necessary to pretend he's asleep? She was obviously doing something she enjoyed. Seems to me he could have participated in gratifying her as well as himself instead of just laying there pretending to be unconscious.

To be honest, the story is a bit nonsensical. If I knew my mom was writing erotic stories about us but didn't want to start anything, I'd come to her room in the middle of the night and try to fuck her right away. Why blackmail her with video?

Ignore the negative grammar police. I’m sure they forget that this is an erotic story forum. I couldn’t care less about that, it’s the erotic content that counts, it’s a 5* from me. Keep it up.

Did not care for this story to much forced sex with his mother there's supposed to be love between a mother and her son!

Awesome story; well told and well written. Love watching them both slowly slide into depravity that they'd both planned well ahead of time! Very Good !!

I loved the story. I just wished I didn't have to read the word "motherslut" 9500 times. Five stars and a favorite point!

My dad had a stroke so he was like brain dead he could hear and see but not so clear I'm dean my mom's name sharm she's 50 now I'm 27 now mom has the face body nice sexy boobs sexy ass and legs down to het size 4 feet and toes it's been about 3 years mom sleeps alone so I have my own campanys I suddenly bought mom a new BMW with her name on the plates I then went shopping i bought new sexy heels a few colours one sexy open back low heel with a thin strap across the toes I then bought sexy nighties some very open see trough sets and skimpy tongs with few sexy g.strings i bought few very short dresses and one special set nighties with open sides it's white I put the stuff in mom's new car u drove home went in called out for mom she'walked wearing a white leggings and a long top with her sandels showing her neatly painted black toes i said mom this is ur gift mom saw the car with her name on it she hugged me and said thanks hun u are so sweet to me I said mom there is a few gift bags in the back seat all what's there is all for u i hope u like it mom said oh dean u bought me a new car I'm sure what's in this bags are all so nice mom said I promise to wear what's in these bags I said mom feel free ok mom there's a black dress in the pink bag i would like it if u wore that this evening mom said ok dean I will and mom what ever is in that bag u will wear even that something for ur feet I said ok mom y go see ur new clothes I'll see to dad and be ready this evening I'm takeing u out to dinner mom said wow that sounds nice I ok mom i saw to dad gave him few meds it' was around 6 I had a shower got dreses by then mom walks out her room wearing that black open back dress it's short very short she put on the open back low heels showing her cute black painted toes her fingers all so black and sexy her make up to the T red lips I said wow sharm u look so sexy mom said oh it's sharm now I said yes sharm I said wait mom this gold chain is missing on u i put the chain on her neck now I said u look beautiful mom said thanks hun u make me feel so lucky to have a man like u u held her to the car she drove her own car we got the dinner place i held her to our table we had a nice dinner we then went for a walk to the mall i asked mom did u wear the under wear with this dress mom said what u think I said u hope u did mom yes i did ok thanks mom we walked talked then I said mom it's been 4 years for dad he's not making any good news so mom i want to be ur man I'm sure u notice how i look at u mom said yes i did see u checking me out now and then i said mom i love u more than u know i see u as a women I love so u tel me how u feel about me then if u say u love me I have one more thing to give u mom said I love u dean I even masturbated fee times thinking of u yeah I love u to i stoped seeing u as a son ok mom i kissed mom softly our mouths opend our tourgs were lost in our mouths then I pulled out a box it's a diamond stone ring i said mom will u be my girl mom said yes i will be ur girl I put the ring on her finger we kissed like lovers on the way home we kissing hiting holding each other we got home I went to get the special bag i gave mom i said go put this on and meet me in the balcony time went mom walked towards me wearing the sexy white nightie and her bedroom heels I saw her and kissed her wet lips the nighty is full see tru i could see her pussy that's how open her nighty was I said mom let's go see dad mom said not like this I said mom don't worry u are mine now we went to see dad I said mom stand rite by me mom did I said dad I'm sorry but mom. Won't be with u anymore she's mine now and we love each other so I'm takeing mom as my wife so now I know it's gona be like this from now on mom said Harry if u can heat me and see me I belong to dean now I'm a women it's been like 4 years iv not being touched see the outfit I'm wearing for dean he owns me now he's my lover now on hes gona make love to me and he loves my body and my feet witch u didn't like that much so now I'm going to be getting fucked nice hard by dean our blood son so l

Just know whose my man now on ok Harry I did love u but that love died long ago so dean is mine now mom and I walked out that room as lovers we kissed sucked each other i sucked mom toes body legs ass pussy boobs kissing licking makeing love till today i fucked mom in the ass my last wish was to fuck mom in all her holes in my dad's room as he watched how his wife was screaming in lust fill we both had dum blasts we sucked and fucked none stop and we still fucking and it's 2023 still fucking

Not really so much a story as a suck and fuck statement. Wasn't really much of a story.

As I'm sure has already been pointed out, here are nine misspelled or incorrect words in your story. A good way to avoid that is to read your story backwards before publishing. This way, they tend to jump out at you! (Yes, spell check is a bitch!) Other than that, it was a good story and I look forward to reading your others.

"Motherslut" is like 10% of the words in this story I swear :) Can't imagine why.

The story is very good but the title is awful. Mother/son incest stories should be so much more respectful of the mom, and the son as well. Not only that but the use of the word Motherslut was grossly overdone.