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goodgurlgetsbadgoodgurlgetsbadabout 12 years ago

Makes me wanna be Mrs Jizm - rawrrr - thanks GA ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mrs Jizm

Where is the ending to this bs with Peter and with Simon.?.?????.

BetterEndingBetterEndingabout 6 years ago
Started Out Good

Well, the series started out fairly well, but in the end you just had to turn her into a full blown whore. I would have liked the ending if Simon had just walked away after the last time she fucked Peter and "forgot" that she was supposed to be blowing him.

The ending was far too abbreviated. A few details about the "plan" were warranted beyond just mentioning some back room at a bar. And who the hell was Katarina and from where did she come?

LaphroaigLaphroaigalmost 2 years ago

I want to lick Mrs Jizm clean

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