All Comments on 'Mrs. Kelly'

Congratulations on another wonderfully written story~ one that draws you into a sweet; yet very erotic scene of a first time experience! Thank you! for still another sexy, mature heroine!!!

you have the starting of one hot serial!!

Hope there is more, what that is...I leave to you.

Thanks

Excellent story, the bet really kept me reading, good work

This was already a great story but Pat's surprise really raised the game.Like all good fantasies just that little bit too good to be true.

The belching was kind of overdone i thought but other than that a real nice story. Thanks yoron.

Overall well written and great story. Maybe you can add more experiences that happened while he was in school. But still great story.

Loved it. Just loved it.

No mention of inches.

A full appreciation for his emotions. He's naive but not a total idiot. Very human story while still being sexy. Excellent work.