All Comments on 'Mrs. Steel'

sleep well

The story was very good and did seem that it could happen like that if given a chance. To many times we lose our chances when they arise because we are afraid to go forth and live it out!

You didn't enable voting! How can people give you a five for this incredible story if you don't let us vote?

keep the stories comeing ha-ha

The ending could have been improved, somewhat with both Kathy and Kathryn throwing away the condoms and fucking barebacked and taking their chances.....

While I love this story, and its sequel (Nick as a middle aged adult reuniting with Kathryn and Kathy...) this story appeared on this site in the past...even with the same name...Mrs. Steel... I think, since this is being presented as an original and new story, we should be given an explanation. I hope this is not plagiarism.

I know that the sequel to this story appeared on this site in June of 2002, and the original sometime in 2001. Since Thesandman was the original author, and he has just changed names (this is NOT theft of intellectual property), I wonder too, why the reposting? Has the story been revised in any way? Perhaps the author can speak to this. I know that all of the stories by Thesandman were taken off Literotica earlier this year. Why? Just curious.

Certainly these questions do not detract in any way from this wonderfully written story.

With each "reposting" of some of my original works.

Read my bio...and that will indicate a few things. But I left Lit for personal reasons. Am back now, embracing my heritage, and have returned as Many Feathers. So though that may be confusing to some, I remain in my heart, Thesandman. It has been by request of some very dear and loyal fans, that I have brought back some of those original classics. I have turned the voting off on these, as they have had their day in the sun so to speak. So, they're here simply for the enjoyment of those that appreciated them in the begining. As well as for a few new fans who can now enjoy the works of Thesandman, under my new official name...Many Feathers.

Best story I've read in years~~!!!

Many Feathers:

You have a special gift for weaving a story so a reader can feel and share the emotions of the main story character. I was very impressed with how you were able to subject Nicky to an obivious consequence for his stealth activities and also end the story with an element of surprise for the reader.

Thanks!

SLO

Under Thesandman but when I went looking through my story folder I couldn't find it. Just as well too. It gave me a chance to reread a great story. Thank You for the chance and for the story. Ronnie W.

Isn't this the same story as before by the sandman? It was good then and now, but its the same thing.74f3

if you bothered to read Many Feathers' Bio, you would have noticed taht he IS Thesandman.

Heck of a story......All's well that ends well

Every teenager should have an experience like this. I don't mean Grandmother' Daughter and Granddauther. Imean the whole 9 yards woould be fine but not realistic. I mean and older woman to teach the art of love making. It's hard learning out of hand. I married my high school sweethart. We were both vergins when we started dating. and married five years later sex was not a questian, we had more than many married people. Some times every night. And in places you would not beleave. Tho 5 years of dating and 29 years and 5 children, We were still learning. WE were married 15 yeqars before she had her first big O. Although she said she did every time we had sex. I was to bumb to know the difference. We did all the good stuff to. I lay this to the fact neather of ever slopt with any one else. Until after she died. That is when my sex education began. And now 25 years later I am sad I could not shear this with her. Keep up the good work I am looking forware to more of the same from you.

it mades me horny reading

This is it!.....Im extremely hot, its time to go fuck my girlfreind now....

It took awhile to get going, but it was worth the wait. I'd have preferred a bit more description of the sex, but the plot is sufficiently intriguing to make up for it.

I thought it was great, just a few, tiny grammatical errors, but I loved it and want to hear more about Nick's adventures with the family.

a stainless steel storie :-)

A great story, If you decided to add more, it would be welcome. Although, it was a great ending for a great story.

What a fantastic fantasy! 70 years ago I had such a fantasy but only for one woman let alone three. Kept Mrs. Thumb and 4 daughters pretty busy for a time. LOL! Good read, MF & Cheers!

One of the best stories I've read in a while, great work!

what a story-talk about fantasies-great stuff, lovely sex scenes, love those women, esp. Katie-the hottest milf-nicely written-thanks

I just recently started reading stores here, This is the horneist story yet.

that such an acclaimed author (well, acclaimed in the small and not very discerning world of Literotica) can make such elementary mistakes as using a possessive apostrophe for plurals.

What has the world come to?

I was a little taken back by the 10 pages, but I endured and thoroughly enjoyed the exciting and stimulating story, Thanks!

Time for a reread of this classic. I remember when this was the runaway top story on the site before TheSandMan's reincarnation. Thanks for a great story.

Loved it! Thank you for sharing your story with us!

The best story I have ever read!

Thank you for that.

The best erotic story I have read !!

Easily the best I've ever read.

Thanks

A delightful story. Thank you for sharing it.

I couldn't stop reading it. Best story so far.

I usually don't read stories this long, but I'm GLAD I did. Great job. I loved it!

Very well written. One of the best on Literotica!

lucky bastard "nick". I would have love to be 1. Alas.... Well done.

it had stayed between Nick and Mrs. Steel.

So well done! Thank you!

The usual plot. If it wasn't for bikinis you wouldn't have much of a story.

Very cool lady would be a blessing to meet someone like her

This took me back 55 years. Even though I can't get it up any more, it revived the fantasies of my youth and brought tears of happiness to my dry eyes.

As my first story on Literotica, I feel so honored, privileged and proud to have you as my virgin experience in 2001. I have absorbed so much reading material in my lifetime, but you're words touched my heart and soul. Your prose is epitome of divine beauty.

I only wish that I could say so much more than just thank you. You enriched my life.

Jason.

I just loved your story. Not as much sex as I would have liked though. Please name your characters differently. Katie, Kathy, Katherine, kelly kim...... How about some Different names to help to story to be less confusing? Thanks.

Your dialogue needs work.

The story was very enjoyable but like some others, the sameness of the names was somewhat challenging even though I understood why you did it that way. After a while I didn't even bother trying to remember them, I just kept reading and enjoying the story. Three horny women, it's a tough life but someone has to do it. Thanks for re-posting.

I just finished all 10 pages. Sad.... Because, I wish there was 10 more pages to read. This was a fantastic story. I hope u will add more chapters. Will be watching to if u do. Thank you for writing this story.

Very good story, sexy, and well paced.

Start from the beginning and enjoy the 10 episodes... Awesome read🤗

Wonderful!

Every young man’s fantasy! Well written with the implausible made acceptable. Hope a quality sequel is being considered

Awesome story. Well written and well paced. I enjoyed it immensely. Keep em cumming ;-)

Awesome loved every word!!! Hot!!!

Absolutely fantastic. I loved every word.

This was a wonderful story. I'll only admit to having a young lover, a friend's son and my son's buddy, the summer after they graduated high school. We both needed someone at that time.

Great story, hope there are more like it

Outstanding.