by HStoner
Love your stories. This one had too much detective and chit chat and not enough action. Please keep writing.
Always enjoy your writing. The erotic mystery category has an excellent addition with this one.
I'm sad that after all these years you still think a male author can't write a female MC. This storey would be so much fun and frisky with a female MC.
Harry thanks for another of your works of art.
It is a great day seeing another of your stories posted
Love social nudism. Have been to family resorts only….you know, kids abound. No overt sexual activity or erections. Would love to try an adults only resort.
Another erotic mystery gem. Thank you again for an entertaining story. Looking forward to the next mystery
I enjoyed the story, things did seem to move very fast, but I understood the reason for that. It was well told.
A very good attempt at combining mystery with erotica. I liked it a lot. I would have liked it more if it was stretched out into two or three segments. It felt like it was hurried in places like the author was afraid of writing too much. In this case I think more would have been better. What was written here would make a perfect outline for a more detailed story.
I agree with the praise for the combination of mystery and erotica.
If you are going to keep things terse, I'd encourage you to avoid the "happily ever after" elements at the end -- not central to the mystery plot, the characters at the time of the action, or the erotic descriptions.
First naked murder mystery I have read or seen. I think I could easily enjoy them. Thanks!
I enjoyed this a lot. I agree with a couple of others it moved pretty fast, I was kinda hoping Meredith did it or that there would at least be some plot being plotted.
When they talked about birth control I though 'hmn that's awful fast' but then I thought... 'what if she's relying on him being a man and having no idea how the pill works and she's trapping him for later ?' ... in short, ignore the people who just want more sex, this could easily be a more complex mystery and still find an audience.... and there'd be time for more sex too ;)
Nice little story that could stand some more elaboration and filling out. Very enjoyable. So we now have a cop and a journalist/nude model who has contacts in the art world. I can think of several plot lines where the couple could feature in several stories with a nudity theme. It is just a thought.
One reader e-mailed me taking me to task for using the archaic term "nudist colony." The characters using that term in the story were not people familiar with the nude lifestyle. I do hear non-nudists refer to nude and clothing optional resorts as "nudist colonies" to this day.
it sounded plausible, had the right amount of tension and intrigue. A very good read.
Great fun and well written, as always. I've read all your submissions over the years and was so pleased to see that you have posted another. I'm looking forward to more!