All Comments on 'My Adventure With My Brother In Law'

Excellent stuff keep it up.

I feel that "newcome" should perhaps look for some other form of amusement - & stop inflicting these extremely badly written stories on the world of cyberotica...

I am sure that India has it's fair share of English-speaking authors - so if they are all not "outsourcing" their talents at call-centres they could perhaps produce some beter India-centric erotica..

Newcome, in the meanwhile - please go back to school & pay a little more attention to your English teacher (no I don't mean looking up her skirt....)..

I have to agree with the pathetic rating given earlier. And wonder who the first comment maker was? The author? The author's friend or relative? Obviously someone who does not have a command of or love for the English language.

My recommendation, Newcome1 is find another pursuit.

(it's not incest to screw an in-law)

PLEASE......at least learn a little of the language or get someone else to write for you.... You may do a lot better at something other than erotica, Maybe a nice poem or something and post it somewhere else. Lots of luck to you in whatever you chose but PLEASE no more of this stuff!

Don't let others bother you! I liked it! It's kinda like a diary style.

wonderful that your brother in law loves you as a wife and accepted you whole heartly.... which is kind of new era emerging in the society... hats off