All Comments on 'My Beauty & The Beast Ch. 01'

by EgyptsGoddess

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ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

Was the chapter cut off? That was an odd place to end if not.

countrygirlflacountrygirlflaover 10 years ago
Strange stopping point???

Its like it was posted but not all of it made it,,,Its good,just hope you dont include the introduction with every chapter,,I thought i was reading the same thing over again,,keep up the good work,,,a few errors,but nothing that would hinder the reader,,,

RheamistressRheamistressover 10 years ago

I am hoping to see that witch get what's coming to her in the end and some happiness to Beast and Belle.. Very good.. :)

shyintxshyintxover 10 years ago

Already read this on here before

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertover 10 years ago

Great story! Did not know if you were revising it or if this was the continuation until I was well into the story. I am looking forward to the update.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Yum!

So far, so good! I eagerly await your next chapter! Stopping points don't matter when the whole story just....flows. I love, love, love it! Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Can't wait to read more!

This is good. I can't wait to read more!

kaat85kaat85over 10 years ago
Great!

I'd love some more please. :)

IsoarianIsoarianover 10 years ago
More please

I am begging you to finish this story, I must know how it plays out and how you choose to end this, granted i wish most of these stories never ended

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
MORE PLEASE!!

please submit more! it's such a great start!

FaithWhiteFaithWhiteover 10 years ago
Very Good Start

It's a commonly written story line & you've managed to write it well. You seem to have issues with spelling. Nothing major that affects the reading of the story but enough that it got tiresome. You managed to use real words so spell check wouldn't pick up on it. This is where an editor comes in handy. Lit does have editors you can use. I look forward to the next chapter.

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