by Patchwork
Can’t wait to see where this will go! Looking forward to the next chapter
I generally enjoy this type of story more than most; schoolgirl bff's becoming more.
This one is top of the league table.
Wonderful.
The reactions between each character were so unexpected and nuanced that i wonder if this story is based on a true relationship. Fantastic. And so so hot
Loved the time you took to introduce Gabby and Mary. Please continue
Its so amazing, the word choices, the coyfull play, the fluidness of the story. I love it, its amazing and i wish there was more.
As a woman who has been here with “straight” friends before, there is something in your writing that is so heartbreaking and sad for Gabby. It’s a very honest portrayal of sexual exploration, while still being completely and totally hot. Well done.
Lovely tale, well written with great descriptives. Looking forward to reading more.
nice work! glad you commented on my story, so i found yours. looking forward to reading more!
Awesome story. Your description of that first kiss was brilliant. five stars and favorited.