by promithius
I didn't even bother reading this yet, the title and description make no sense at all.
Wasnt bad I enjoyed it but the only real invest was Pam and her father. I don't consider in-law incestuous unless they are a siblings significant other not a brother in-law and his wife. But besides that it was a good story u have talent
The sex between Pam and her dad was good. And Pete forcing Vivian, and then Pam to do what he wanted was good. The ending though, was stupid. I half expected when the brothers started getting rude to Vivian, that they'd rip her clothes off and take turns with her on the dining room table. And that the rest of her family would use her however they wanted to. Maybe that would've been the reason for her attitude. It would've been a much better forced incest ending than what the readers got.