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All Comments on 'My Darling Nicki'

by Hyde86

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Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesalmost 10 years ago
To "Rubbish":

If you're going to blast someone, take the time to ensure you haven't misspelled a few words yourself. What the fuck is a "condon"? Did you mean "condom", you fucking idiot?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
to rubbish.. who are you....

..trying to kid?

To the author, that was a beautifully spun story. Just a suggestion, get into the intimate parts a little more in detail. If you hit hat, this will be spot-on. Good job :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
wew

One hell of a story.. More of this please

Hyde86Hyde86almost 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks everybody!

I just wanted to say thank you for the kind words and advice. This is actually a true story, so if you don't like the plot, you don't like history haha.

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Most of my stories have at least a little bit of truth to them. Some are based on real life, some based on random ideas I have. If you would like a story written just for you, I always enjoy taking requests.