All Comments on 'My Daughter, The Nudist'

Sensitive and non-sensational treatment of a difficult area. But still fun and sexy in places. Difficult thing to pull off. Well done. PK

Well done, hun! Your normal, deceptively simple, elegance and focus on characters and feelings. Em

Really well done! I could feel for the father, wrestling with his conscience while dealing with his daughter's sexuality, and you handled it beautifully!

Good luck in the contest!

And an enjoyable, fluid read, too! Not completely sure that Leah isn't bi *and* maybe, just maybe, wanting "the forbidden" with her father. But I suspect you wanted to convey that concept and just let us readers suffer the consequences of thinking that way. ;-)

I hope there is a chapter 2. 5 stars!

Writing skill exemplary; character delineation the same.

The plot scenario (minus the European trip and the gay girlfriend) a familiar one as a father to two grown daughters who had to come to terms with my own sexual response to their challenging views on nudity. Once accepted as a natural phenomenon the tension was considerably reduced and our father/daughter roles regained their ascendancy with the greater awareness of who we were creating enhanced appreciation for the wonderful unique communication it afforded us all.

Kudos on dealing with a subject too often sensationalized and thereby diminished in its wonder.

(This is not a condemnation (nor an endorsement) of the "Incest" stories on Literotica; when done well they are beautiful expressions of love--and fantasies which are universal.

Keep writing please.

MLJ

Great story. Nudism is a great lifestyle, especially family nudism. And if you have a private fenced in backyard pool, the only way to enjoy it is nude. Wearing swimwear when you don’t have to is just plain asinine.

Nice little story.

One grammatical/spelling nit to pick: Names are capitalized. This includes common words used as names.

Let’s go to my mom’s house. Not a name, not capitalized.

Let’s go to Mom’s house. Is a name, is capitalized.

The bees make honey. Not a name.

I love you, Honey. Is a name.

hope there's part 2

I think this was well presented. It was thoughtfully composed and explained the delicate matters between a father's and daughter's interests. It wasn't until you introduced the girlfriend/lover reveal that I realized the story infatuation was one-sided. It dawned on me why you had not included his daughter's point of view for the usual sexual theme of father-daughter incest on Lit. That was nice - that this didn't go there. Indeed a five-star rating from my perspective. [Even the ex-scene conversation was pleasantly done!]

Nicely done. I admire your restraint for not going down the obvious path.

She's incorrigible :)

Beautifully written, well done!

A well written-and steamy ballsy tease. I wonder how many saw the title and as the story progressed was like "wait for it, wait for it..." and are still waiting. On the plus side, good idea to not put it in I/T, Daddy just looking isn't enough. I do wonder though if some readers skipped over it, think its a misplaced taboo piece?

Regardless, I found it enjoyable and the E/V aspect well handed. Five stars for the story and hotness factor.

Very well written and erotic. Of course I was hoping Phil and Leah would have sex but his acceptance of her nudity by the end felt like a satisfying resolution.

Idiotic. What the heck is the matter with Phil (aka you?) She's not a child, and he wouldnt be "exploiting" her, for gods sake. In fact she's far less of a child than he is - she could have taught him so much about intimacy. Theres so much more to mature sex - physical bonding - than Phil denied to them both, with much permanent damage and estrangement, because of his/your thoroughly fatuous (fat-headed) attachment to childish Sunday school mumbo jumbo, and archaic Augustinian control mechanisms. And yet he/you embraced prostitution, and the amorality of all that tawdry, scripted deception and secrecy.

Life is so short, with so few chances of experiencing something special, without a harmful downside.

You've saddened my whole day.

That’s quite the tease, but well written and good fun. I liked your leads and how their relationship evolved. Another chapter for future developments would be great!

Beautiful story, the daughter’s nudity and her father’s reactions are wonderfully described. Yes, we’d all like things to get more intimate at times, but this was a very realistic reaction from a father not ready to go that far.

Great writing.

She didn't negotiate with her father she emotionally blackmailed him! That's dispicable and highlights the low character she learned from her mother.