All Comments on 'My First Apartment'

by michie

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
4* Good Story...

But it could have been longer in terms of him and her in her apartment. Certainly worth a Chapter 2! He is still out there. Maybe some forced action with Susan and Michelle.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Not one of your best

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