All Comments on 'My First Day as a Lesbian Cum Slave'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Interesting so far..

Keep going on !

franksummersfranksummersabout 10 years ago
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Nice work! Definitely will follow this story.

JoeJetsonJoeJetsonabout 10 years ago
Beautiful Control Scene

Loved it, even though I'm a white heterosexual male

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Pretty please can we get more of this? Maybe a story three weeks into her 'training' and a story at the end, and then take it from there...?

Midnight_SleeperMidnight_Sleeperabout 10 years ago
OMG

Best story on literotica ever!

Midnight_SleeperMidnight_Sleeperabout 10 years ago
You HAVE to carry this on

Seriously

broken1477broken1477about 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thanks for the comments. By your suggestions, I have submitted a continuation, it should be approved soon. Enjoy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
A lighter touch

Audra came very quickly the first time. That is commendable!

Audra could greatly benefit from having a hoodectomy. By removing that excess skin, her throbbing clitoris would be permanently exposed. Her orgasms would come almost instantly. Domme Mistresses pay a heft premium for such performance, you know?

Alyson G.

broken1477broken1477almost 10 years agoAuthor
Coming Soon

I have submitted a another continuation of this story and hope to have it approved soon. It will be titled Lesbian Cum Slave Final Exam pt 1. Check back for Audra's next ordeal...

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 10 years ago
i just found this

And I already love it, I hope its a nice long loving story.. just like it started out to be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
5/5

I really loved this story.

cal28cal28over 8 years ago
Loved it

I cannot get enough of this story. I read it fr the first time last week and I've been having dreams about it every night. Dream that wake me up in the middle of the night with a raging hard-on and I have to jerk off while reading it again just to get back to sleep. I've read all parts of this story and love it. I hope some day you will continue it.

DucaDiVizziniDucaDiVizziniabout 6 years ago
Fucking wonderful

So far, this is amazing, Oh, how I wish this was a video!

Thors_FistThors_Fistover 4 years ago
Excellent Work for First Effort

Enjoyed this story. Looking forward to next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sorry. I didn’t like this at all.

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