All Comments on 'My First Kiss...'

If you are as stated at the beginning, congratulations for having a go, to write with a language which is not your native tongue is VERY challenging. With practice and a sympathetic editor you will only get better.

Thanks for your words, yep its dificult to write proper english esp the details

This is a lovely story. I don't know whether it's really true (probably not), but it feels genuine. Don't worry about your English; your writing is very easy to understand and much better than many native writers'. I gave you 5 stars.

"it feel genuine" enough for you so its fine by me :)

Nice story there, and it does sound like a true one..