by timetravhippie
This chapter was excellent! Some angst but a lot of love as your characters and story continues to develop.
Ed
The whole thing of Nick and his mate and the mate‘s mother was a bit constructed as a back story but this story here is on a different level Really, really good. Keep going
I have enjoyed this series and I hope that it continues! I do hope that Nick has a lot of fun at college.
Or is it a story ? The heart and love have no steering wheel.
You have to keep this going, you have developed enough story lines for at least a few more parts!
Great storyline through the series. I look forward to the next chapter and to see where you take this! So many choices...sexting/new people/threesome etc.
Overtly erotic and subtly funny. Well done! 5*
You did a excellent job of crafting this chapter with a open ended ending. Although you could another chapter or two as well easily, which I hope you do.
But in general, the sex -- of which there's a lot -- happens much too fast each time.
This is a hell of ah story ... .I cannot wait for chapter 4. Hope they come out and tell Tommy. Cougars are the best !!!!
Personally I hope tommy finds out and is totally cool with it in the 4th instalment.... your Literally one of the best authors I have seen on here you right good enough stories for books... You also write in a good amount of character development to make the stories and situations believable which can be a turn off on other stories that rush everything
Great story but it definitely shouldn't end here. For me, I favor it continuing with these two folks ending up together. Their personalities have developed to excluding other partners for both of them. Please continue their story. :-)
Your an excellent writer with strong characters and storylines . This series has been captivating and I hope you continue it , as it’s been a page turner . I’m going to check out your other stories while I impatiently await the next release in this story ! On a personal note - zoot allures R.I.P. F.Z.
I REALLY love the story/plot line. Very entertaining...thank you can't wait to read another installment!
One of the best stories I have read in this site it would be so erotic if nick makes laura pregnant in the next series so they may have a reason to be together
Quite a captivating story, it is. As much as it's a fine ending on its own, there is so much more left to imagination.
Would you anyway like to develop it further? It may have 2 more chapters or whatever you design it to be.