All Comments on 'My Green-Eyed Cousin'

Hot day, hot girl, hot sex -- looks more fun than just kissing, cousins.

This was truly a great first submission. I loved the story. The relationship between the cousins was real and sexy. They were comfortable with one another and pushed the envelope. I hope you write another chapter or story.

Nookiehunter

what happened here should be spread out over months not less than an hour. you need to give more background as to their relationship with each other before this. you need to give more character development. you need to give a proper end not just leave the readers hanging. this should have been chapter two of three or four not a stand alone delete and rewrite it and do it right.

this was rushed and needs a rewrite by a GOOD WRITER using a GOOD EDITOR.

Gross

Good, very good.