by mikelover92
A good and a catchy title. Good work ! :D ... You could made the sex scene more longer though cause it was so hot ...it ended too soon . best of luck
Believe you should continue this story and have some idea maybe we can talk about. Please email me
I am happy you guys like my story and I would love some criticism! This is my very first try at any form of erotic writing, so any tips to help me improve on my writing is greatly appreciated!!!!
A nice little story here, you don't really see to many paranormal ones like this but please continue. As it would be fun to see their other adventures together but all in all keep up the good work. And I look forward to seeing whatever else you can come up with..