by Lust_for_mom
Wondearful tale with both growing more together.
You do have a few gaffe that an editor, or maybe a Proof Reader, could help you better understand
As a person raised with a version of English that differs significantly from American (English) there are idiosyncrasies that you need explained.
With that tutelage your offerings will be better received your Americans simply because they will be easier to read.
BTW, your sex scene is FANTASTIC.