by blondechristine2012
Excellent story really well told, I do hope you post more.................
As a photographer, I have to like this story. Luckily, that's an easy task because it's extremely well written. It's unusually long for a "first effort," but it holds together very well. I hope you'll be posting more.
Chrissy
I have to admit this one was a tad more exciting then the "Rain", but perhaps that is because you didn't make us wait for the sex. I love the camera angle as the seductive means to progress to full on sex. I repeat that you have a gift for telling a story, a very casual but on point development of the action, everything in the right time and the right place. While I am sure we all wanted that first union in the rain, you knew it would be better in her place and it was. Now more then ever I hope that you have more to tell, more to share and more to cum! - Kevin
Chriss, you truely are a very talented story weaver and draw all of us salivating readers right along with you. Thank you so much ! Encore ad infinite,,,uuummmm !