All Comments on 'My Niece, Misty'

I really need more!

It's good, I like it but it's not a story. It didn't go anywhere, nothing happened. It would be much better if you'd just go somewhere with it. I'm thinking you have plans for the rest of it but if you could just have something happen in the first part it would be better. Let's say she "accidentally" flashes him just, for a second, naked. Maybe she smiles at him, maybe not. Or maybe she catches him with a boner in his pants and smiles.