All Comments on 'My Revealing Daughter'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Did you find a bargain sale on commas? Their overuse is too distracting!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
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Too short for them to have never thought about incest and just jump right to it....she has been depressed for months and crying all day with an father who leaves her to wallow in sorrow....camel toe shorts are not comfortable to sleep in....of course you can see her nipple when you pull her shirt out...no nipples are not the size of a pencil....stop with the 8" dicks..women want girth...really ending it with he being Bi and with the mom with him knowing nothing for a year...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Please continue this story. Instead of her moving away to attend college, she could attend a local community college. Or they could both move and she could go to a different university. Either way, they need to continue building their sexual relationship.

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