by Janice1939
I am a male sub also and enjoyed what has happened to him
Looking forward to your stories of how you trained your kids.
Gives Home Schooling a non PC meaning.
C.R.A.P
story all over place made no sense
gone from one extreme to another.most stories its usually 12"dicks but 2"dick #really yet son has monster cock
daughter say how did he get you preggo with that dick then you move on to more stupid humiliating him
story needs back story not just one small part on how they first started
stuff like eg How did twins get involved ? etc etc
Your spelling, grammar and punctuation are horrible and the story goes back and forth in a way that makes it difficult to follow. The basic premise you have could be really hot if it was written properly. Please use some of the tutorials Lit has to offer.
I don't agree that it was crap, I enjoyed it. Very interesting treatment of a difficult subject, but very erotic too.
The touch with the adult kids taking part was very stimulating. Brother should have been allowed to fuck one of the females and husband made to clean up the mess from both the cock and pussy eating.
You are a very nasty lady. I would love to be your clean up boy. I cum real hard reading this story. look my stories up under Anal Slave. I like your style.