All Comments on 'My Step-Sister and Mom Ch. 03'

The whole serie is great. but it need a lot of editing in terms of gramar and punctuation. I realy love the two way "non consent" part of it. Thanks a lot for posting !

Great storyline, I must admit there were a few grammatical errors which caused me to have to reread and therefore slowed the flow, but they were few and far.

Nice work, look forward to reading more.

really great job on these and hopefully Ill c more of them in the future lol

Will you write about your next adventures. So far so good.

Why don't you go out with them in some lonely place and give them a surprise. I love your story.

So good ..... I hope you write more some day soon. Thanks for the 3 chapters.

More more please

A little editing and a lot of proof reading would do wonders.