All Comments on 'My Wife, Her Student Ch. 02'

For original thought. You have a great premise but... There's that word. Way too short, not enough development. Take your time, try again, I know you can do it because you were writing the story of me and my wife. We fantasized to each other frequently. Our secret was whispering long, extremely detailed accounts of what was going on in our minds while slowly fucking one another to oblivion. We had discovered that the journey was at least as good as the destination.

But you did get on " my wife and I " fantasy comment.