All Comments on 'Naughty Wife'

He gets what he deserves. Dumb idea.

1 star

"I'll admit from the off, that I'm well off." My wife has a huge sex drive by the wife. I bailed on your little cuck take as soon as I realized that you were another poster who thinks a couple of poorly written paragraphs about sick people is an erotic story.

"I decided it was my duty to clean her pussy so she' couldn't get pregnant." - Eating a cream pie isn't birth control.

Really, sorry but not worth the read...

"What I'm going to admit to will make me seem foolish but I promise you I'm no one's fool."

Oh yes you are.

No character(s) development so don't care what happens to them.

No build up to a climax.

No climax.

Nothing to resolve.

No real point to the story.

1*

You posted a story on a porn site with a category specifically about wives having sex with other men, and in you story you have just that, a wife having sex with other men. Oh, the nerve. How dare you provide exactly what this category is supposed to have? Don't you know that by doing so you have awakened the slumbering slugs who have nothing better to do than read these stories, jerk their tiny shriveled peckers, then feel guilty about it so they post those insanely stupid negative comments? Tell me, is there a more pathetic group of as swipes on the planet than them? Nope.

Cuck cuck cuckoo

Wow that was horrible. Only redeeming part was it was short

Only middle-school girls write with a lower case 'i', but they outgrow it my age 13. That writing skill is literally learned in kindergarten. Unless you wrote this on a yellow pad, any spell-checker since about 1985 should catch that. But this problem might've been the highlight of this tale.