All Comments on 'नेहा का परिवार 04'

Dear Seema, the story is progressing very well. Please make it a long one. I can see the great potential for this to become a novella.

Thanks for taking trouble to write in Hindi

Very good story.

Waiting for the next part.

Seema, you have merged great sensuality of a young teen's desires and her trepidation about the unknown so well with your words. Marvellous

Harrie

PS I am now your official fan.

As expected you are keeping the tempo and pace so nicely.

Can not wait for the explosive sex between Mamaji and Neha.......

Excellent story