All Comments on 'Neighbors: The Surprise'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot Story

Me and my wife loved this story, had a hot session after reading it with her getting me to push 3 fingers into her soaking wet pussy (never had that many in her before) as she sucked my cock!!! Maybe we'll play out some of the other elements of it soon too!

LenardSpencerLenardSpencerover 4 years ago
Good for gander?

I hope he made a point of fucking other women in future when he was away. His slut wife had been cheating on him with Christy for months then compounded it by fucking Christy's husband and having a threesome... without her husband. How many times had they done this? Plus, in future, while he was away travelling, his slut wife would be having sex with Christy plus the husband. Too one sided for the slut wife, as far as I'm concerned.

Antryg_WindroseAntryg_Windroseabout 3 years ago
Walls of text

Huge paragraphs can work on printed pages but not so well on small screens. I'll admit to skipping past lengthy blocks of repetitive verbiage because hard to follow. Try some editing.

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4/22/2024 - I've spent the last few months writing on Medium as Anton J Pierce. Mostly writing about writing (erotica) but also a couple of short fiction pieces that will make their way to this platform. First (The Birthday Gift) should be out in the next couple of days. Hope ...

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