by ChazThain
No! Don't leave us there!
It's unfortunately believable that Barb might never have had an orgasm. It's incredible that she let her friend restrain her and touch her so intimately, but I'm willing to go for it. But to leave us without Barb's reaction to her first (massive) orgasm, and then to tease that the narrator might want more than friendship, that's just cruel.
All kidding aside, this was a fun little story, or at least episode 1 off a fun story. Please continue.
I actually have a second chapter halfway done, but I'd stuck for a plausible way to ... well I want to introduce a certain complication.
Such a sensual, sexy tale…and hot as hell!!! Thanks for sharing it with us! We’d love to see where you take this from here.
You have a good premise and you are working on a second chapter. Good for you.
Seriously, dude this is going to good to stop. In fact it could go for several chapters, Barb definitely needs to re-think her sex life with her husband, at least, find out what his hang ups are and where they came from. Then if her husband is to prudish to even admit a problem, then have Barb and Gina connect.
Maybe another session with Gina, to really make sparks fly. It could only get better.
the actual sex scenes here were fun but i think you rushed through the set up and it lessened a bunch of the tension that you could have otherwise created with your premise.
Hopefully part 2 has lesbian sex with the husband in the house but not knowing. He hears sounds but dismisses them as a deep massage that the friend had promised the wife to relieve stress. Just thoughts.