All Comments on 'New Apartment and a New Deal Pt. 01'

Please reread and edit... waist, not waste, sexiest not sexists...

I enjoyed the story although, no matter how free a spirit, it is hard to believe a girl would so readily accept the situation. Putting that concern aside, the story is a fun read.

Heels** waist**

spelling and grammar are sexy

I enjoyed the story, I would love to edit it for you, and your next stories. I believe it will help.