All Comments on 'New Family Rules Ch. 05'

Nothing wrong with the story, except it's more of a simple calendar-of-events narration than a sexually provocative piece for Literotica!

I liked it a lot. I just couldn't figure out where the incest was. Given that no family members fucked each other, shouldn't this have been listed on the exhibitionist & voyeurism page?

Love this story keep them coming :-)

great story

Nice...but...Too much details of athletic games...Tennis, swimming, wrestling. Suddenly Meryl's Mom using dildo in front of them is bs.

Too much outsiders coming in the mix. How about the details of their parents swapping? How about Amanda encouraging her Mom to have sex with her boyfriend? Or Gwen and her brother having sex and caught by their parents? And eventually ok with it?

Hope this story will end up with more incest in it. Like the Mother and son and the Father and daughter while the knowledge of everybody in the two families.

It's a great story but it would have been better if you focused more on sex

How harry was feeling when he first saw his sister's pussy

How his look for his sister changed after he penetrated her

How she would always give him a better view of her womanhood after their experience

Details of when they're having sex

How good it felt

Amanda guiding it inside meryl and vice versa and the feelings of such event

More details about the semen release inside the girls

Parents more aware about their youth fucking ( watching- asking about details like that part of amanda's mother-etc)

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To sum it up

It's not enough to make readers hard or wet you have to make their juices burst out

It's a very good story. You should continue it!

Great series, evolving from family moving into nudism to friends joining in. Where next with the characters?

I like how this become very well rounded up story about actually nudists, who just happen to be three way item, and happen to have some kinky parents, and not descend into usual swinger mess 'nudist' stories often does. Yes, there probably could be another dozen chapters in the middle describing little more but how our main trio fucked each other brains out, in all three beds they can officially use and several other locations just for the kinks of it, but, while there fun to be had, that wouldn't make this to be a better story, as far story goes, just clutter it up, probably.

Please write more to this story

I sure you write more. It is getting so hot.

Amanda Meryl and Harry made this a Well-rounded love story for 3 people! Nude is becoming acceptable more places than ever! Are you going todo 2 more stories; one about college life and 2, about after college, with Meryl Back and Children? Great Story!

Very good read. Not sure why this last was under Incest. To the other commentators, this series was about Exhibitionism. Typically sex is not the focus compared to a nudist lifestyle.

Disappointed Gwen was not involved in the last chapter. Also kind of wished Meryl would have loaned Harry to her Mom to satisfy her once she joined in.

Overall I liked the storyline and character development. Too me this was about enjoying the feeling and those who embraced it.

We hope so.....

everyone they meet happens to be nudists or interested

This story needs to be continued.

I have enjoyed your stories immensely, I've been reading yours for a while. This is my favorite story arc on this site. I just began writing stories here as well, and if you don't mind I'd love your feedback.

That nudists were automatically swingers, swapping and free sex junkies. Didn't like much about the 3 total pages I read of the entire 7 chapters.

Almost dropped to 3+

Of I forgot. The word is "rode" not "road". Or was that in the prior story?

i like the story,,dont love it, but,,,,i finally figured it out!! you know a lot about tennis(boring) but you dont know how to write a descriptive love scene,,,too bad,,thats why we are all here!!,,,,well keep at it,,some day you might learn! otherwise its an interesting tale..although sophomorish,,